It’s sad when you have a friend that you care about, but you can’t keep in touch with him.
It’s his birthday, you remember, you want to send an SMS or leave a comment at his friendster, but you just can’t.
It’s so complicated. You might say what’s the fuss, why hesitate? Why create a border when there’s always a bridge?
There’s already a boundary and I’m not making it. The bridge had once been used and it cause one of us falls into the river under the bridge. Should I keep on letting the one I care about to keep on drowning?
I pulled him back on the ground and ask him to keep standing on where he should but he said he can’t. He said it was his destiny to be where he wants to be.
So I made my decision to close the brigde and never let him enter my space again. It’s cruel, but it’s for his best. My best too, insyaAllah.
It’s his birthday, you remember, you want to send an SMS or leave a comment at his friendster, but you just can’t.
It’s so complicated. You might say what’s the fuss, why hesitate? Why create a border when there’s always a bridge?
There’s already a boundary and I’m not making it. The bridge had once been used and it cause one of us falls into the river under the bridge. Should I keep on letting the one I care about to keep on drowning?
I pulled him back on the ground and ask him to keep standing on where he should but he said he can’t. He said it was his destiny to be where he wants to be.
So I made my decision to close the brigde and never let him enter my space again. It’s cruel, but it’s for his best. My best too, insyaAllah.
~IMAN NAILAH 2008~
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16 comments:
rasanya kan..kena buat jambatan konkrit yang ada penghadang, InsyaAllah tak jatuh. Ni sure jambatan gantung yg takde penghadang kan?... hehe
haa baru teringat nak komen apa sbnrnya. Apa yg membuatkan org jatuh dari jmbtn? Kalau awak boleh masukkan punca terjatuh kan, etc. simbolik angin ke, orang tolak ke kan sure boleh melengkapkan karya ni. Itu jela yg rasa missing, sbb tiba-tiba terjatuh kan. just saya punya 1 sen malaysia
mmg jambatan yang tak kuat pun...senang terjatuh. satu sen msia? maksudnyer?
1 sen malaysia pendapat = 2 cents opinion... maksudnya pendapat yg tidak bernilai sgt
hoho... poetical entry... tp x paham sgt... nak menggambarkan apa ni?? literal view nyer??
begini, kita ada sorg kwn lelaki. Perhubungan tu digambarkan sbg jambatan. Walaupun kwn ttp ade border betul tak, tp die langgar limit tu smpi die yg sakit hati (terluka). So sy rase better kitorg dah tak ctc langsung spy die dpt lupekan saya...camtulah lebih kurg. Jaga hati masing2... (ha...terang2 dh jelaskan kat sini...vulnerable x saye...?huhu)
kawanla dgn 'engineer' ke 'kontraktor' ke kan, nanti bolehla dia baiki jambatan tu.maka jatuh tiada lagi.. :P (kidding je.)
iman, kite suke sgt entry ni... nk wat sendiri x termampu..tp mcmni laa yg kite nk luahkan sbnrnya... hehe.. tq2 ;)
blurr~ huhu
to nurira - thx sbb memahami...bahagia sbb tahu ada org berkongsi perasaan yg sama...
tp musafir - aik, dh jelaskan kat comment atas tu pun blur lagi ke... hmm... :p
The bridge had once been used and it cause one of us falls into the river under the bridge.--> under the bridge tu act tak perlu mention pun takpe, sebab org lgsg akn tahu bila ada jambatan, akan ada sungai di bawahnya. well describe about your feelng ukhti. nice to read it, no need to know more =)
i left someting in ur email for a review. syukran
"A bridge is a structure built to span a gorge, valley, road, railroad track, river, body of water, or any other physical obstacle, for the purpose of providing passage over the obstacle." Wikipedia
err...jambatan udara klcc kat bawahnya takde sungai,7/8 drpd Jambatan Dunn Memorial pun takde sungai..etc..etc. So mmg patut kot rasanya mention ade sungai..just sekadar pendapat
sokong2! time kasih saudara hassan atas informasi t'sbt...hihi to musafir - mmg nak bgtau yg tu je...
The bridge had once been used and it cause one of us falls into the river --> kalau tanpa disambung dengan 'under the bridge' rasa anda takkan menebak juga tu jambatan udara klcc, tetapi fikiran anda akan lari ke sungai kerana dah di mention 'river' dalam ayat di atas. itulah sastera, tidak rigid dan selalu bersifat abstrak. kalau nak terlalu menekuni dictionary, memang seluruh karya sastera patut dipersoalkan..
ooh...setelah hampir setahun, sy review balik post ni dan semua comments... mmg menarik. Kan bagus ada timbal balik mcm ni kat blog ipem. Hmm...i shud do somthing... ;)
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